At first, the story seems to convey a normal love story that is similar to many other romantic stories. However, inside the story hidden another message of love- love for family. Daniel, the male protagonist, like many other Asian Americans had to live up to his parents’ expectation which is to attend a medical university, but in fact, he just wanted to be a poet. Likewise, Natasha also had problems with her father, the one who had made a big mistake that led to the deportation of her family. The conflict between the protagonists and their families seemed to be unsolvable. Nonetheless, the love for family defeated every trouble when in the end Daniel became a writer as his wish, and the upset that Natasha had toward his father dissolved. Was it not for love, Daniel’s parents wouldn’t have allowed him to study literature, and was it not for love, Natasha couldn’t have normalized the relationship between her and her father. Consequently, in “ The sun is also a star”, love for family was ingeniously hidden behind the normal concept of love thereby
At first, the story seems to convey a normal love story that is similar to many other romantic stories. However, inside the story hidden another message of love- love for family. Daniel, the male protagonist, like many other Asian Americans had to live up to his parents’ expectation which is to attend a medical university, but in fact, he just wanted to be a poet. Likewise, Natasha also had problems with her father, the one who had made a big mistake that led to the deportation of her family. The conflict between the protagonists and their families seemed to be unsolvable. Nonetheless, the love for family defeated every trouble when in the end Daniel became a writer as his wish, and the upset that Natasha had toward his father dissolved. Was it not for love, Daniel’s parents wouldn’t have allowed him to study literature, and was it not for love, Natasha couldn’t have normalized the relationship between her and her father. Consequently, in “ The sun is also a star”, love for family was ingeniously hidden behind the normal concept of love thereby
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| 2021-06-13 | phạm giang | 56 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, likewise, nonetheless, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86338797814 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72970374046 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612021857923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3169640557 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546616620421 0.244688304435 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2390107071 0.084324248473 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191167492293 0.0667982634062 286% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.546616620421 0.151304729494 361% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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