Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use alternative energy sources such as wind energy, solar energy and so on. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
The trend towards industries using fossil fuels is increasingly prevalent. However, it is encouraged to use alternative energy sources. In my opinion, I completely agree with this for two main reasons. First, renewable sources including wind and solar power are beneficial to the environment and second, they are more economical compared to their fossil counterparts.
In terms of alternative energy sources, wind and solar power are environmentally friendly because they do not release any toxic gases into the atmosphere after exploiting them. The result of using these sources is to create electricity to power such vehicles as trams and electric cars, which are widely used in most parts of the world and do not release carbon dioxide. Unlike fossil fuels including coal, petroleum, and oil, they are of necessity to power petroleum-consumed transports. This, however, poses a problem to the environment such as global warming due to the excessive amount of toxic gases emitted into the air.
Apart from the reason expressed above, I believe that the usage of renewable sources also benefits the economy of a country because they often cost less than that of fossil fuels. Wind and solar power are available and ubiquitous, which can easily be gained almost everywhere as long as proper equipment is installed. This equipment including a wind turbine or a solar panel can be found in most electric shops nowadays, enabling governments to invest and create electricity for their country. In contrast, fossil fuels take a lot of time and effort to exploit because coal and oil lay underground, and the exploitation of them has to depend on advanced drills and other expensive tools.
In conclusion, it is true that the usage of fossil fuels has been evident for years. I, however, believe that renewable sources such as wind and solar power should be taken priority because not only are they eco-friendly but also do not cost a great deal of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, apart from, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81044369273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.675775734 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297633863946 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104054740036 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758670160943 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19381055124 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609598224586 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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