Fossil fuels such as coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, is encouraged. Is this trend a positive or negative development?
In recent years, fossil fuels have been replaced by the alternative enegry in the usage in many countries. such development is a positive trend as the worlwide demanding for energy is increasing, while the sources of fossil fuels are being limited, and this trend should be encouraged in a global scale for the reasons below.
The limitation in the use of fossil fuels has been a general knowlegde for years. that is why finding an alternative source of energy such as wind energy or solar energy is a critical thing, since many countries still rely heavily on the fossil fuels like coal, oil and gas for domestic use, and manufacture. alternative energy, however, is unlimited and more accessible comparing to the fossil fuels. To use the type of energy, it only require simple constructions such as solar pannel to utilize solar energy and wind turbine for wind energy. Uncomplicated exploitation and unlimited use are the two advandtages of these sources of energy.
Additionally, the use of alternative energy can prevent the harmness to the environment because it is a environmental-friendly source of energy. using the alternative resources means keeping the eco-system save and healthy. this is equivalent to less pollution, less damage to the earth and no more global warming alarming. Moreover, this type of energy will not endanger the eco-system as much as when exploiting the fossil fuels.
it cannot be denied the truth advantages of the new green resources bringing to the humankind and the earth. encouraging using it is one of the facil action that any governments can take to protect this planet, and it is also the most effective way to confront the issue of the diminish of the fossile fuels. If the humankind can use these green resources as earlier as possible, many pending issues regarding the ecosystem or energy crisis will not be emerge anymore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... enegry in the usage in many countries. such development is a positive trend as the ...
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...has been a general knowlegde for years. that is why finding an alternative source of...
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Suggestion: Alternative
... gas for domestic use, and manufacture. alternative energy, however, is unlimited and more ...
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...els. To use the type of energy, it only require simple constructions such as solar pann...
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...rmness to the environment because it is a environmental-friendly source of energy...
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...nvironmental-friendly source of energy. using the alternative resources means keeping...
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...eeping the eco-system save and healthy. this is equivalent to less pollution, less d...
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Suggestion: Encouraging
...ringing to the humankind and the earth. encouraging using it is one of the facil action tha...
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... effective way to confront the issue of the diminish of the fossile fuels. If the humankind ...
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...an use these green resources as earlier as possible, many pending issues regarding...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04823151125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92179472941 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511254019293 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6015137918 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405105398245 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130312096213 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753326800129 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224669797494 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107971234122 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.