Nowaday, Pedogical is an integral part of people who relocate themself to have a venerable lecture in further education . The period have witnessed a tremendous escalation the volumne of university's syllabus and see a modest growth of the onerousness of the formal examinations make university student take a large proportion of their timetable for learning lead them to face more desease. Personally, i reckon that student without devote to schooling, they should spend time for doing other activities.
On one the hand, it is indisputable that schooling is indispensable in individual's life. With the teacher's observation, student learn conscientiously to have an intensive knowledge about their job and enhence the falcuty of synthesis knowledge and discrimination the reliable information to serve their future career. Learning situation in university create the student own a genius in study skills and group work With high academic achievement in curriculum, they can land a decent and stable job which ensure a adequate income.
Nevertheless, it is lucid that many health warning and social problem sterm form spending almost time for studying. The head irritation which is a painful feeling when study too much and obesity is initiated emergence due to the strain of studying such long hours then it make we are underperforming to acquire the lecture. Studying too much transform we form the spontaneous person to inactive person then it cause indequate devolopment of our pattern behaviour, interpersonal skills.and not having time to socialise with friend and expand the social media.
Therefore, student should do other activities in their leisure time have some benefits. Student should participate in sport such as soccer, basketball, tennis,... or go to the gym to practice the physical trainning to ameliorate the pressure of study affect and control the body fat. They can attend to the conservatory with our friend to learn to play the instruments such as guitar, violin, trumpet... or just basically enjoys the symphonies, the concertos. Student can gain benefits in the other activities and it make student get refreshed their brain after an awful study pressure.
In conclusion, I belived that it is essential to seperate time for relocate to the university and other activites. Student can cram many knowledge not only in the academic, but also from experiences the other activites.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers Therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901 20
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers Therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, i reckon, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37301587302 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02413808037 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4183003058 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.470588235 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294036695439 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910566158477 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095848263818 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152771265896 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585034157934 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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