In the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying? To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In modern society, with the rapid innovation of technology, more and more people are interested in reading news online, instead of buying newspapers. Some people suppose that, in the future, people are no longer interested in printed books and newspapers. From my standpoint, I disagree with this statement because books and newspapers have their special meanings, and reading online will always not be free.
There are many convincing reasons accounted for the existence of printed books and newspapers. Many people will keep the habit of purchasing books to enjoy every moment of each page, including the words, pictures, and messages from the authors. Others are keen on reading newspapers, a large one, and turning over each page in the morning coffee time. Some of the books and newspapers which are collected by most adults, even children, are a treasure. Besides, using too much time on electric devices such as smartphones or computers to serve the reading can bring detrimental effects on our health, especially the vision. Whereas, printed paper with suitable color of papers and letters, and the adequate quality of light would be an ideal method for both studying and entertainment.
However, nowadays, several apps which contain high-quality books or accurate information written in newspapers will require registration fees. Using apps means people are purchasing knowledge, and they had to pay for what they learn. In addition, all printed books are sold in the bookstore, therefore, the resource of online books is still restricted, people hard to find an unpopular one on those internet platforms.
In conclusion, I find it difficult to accept this statement, because printed books and newspapers usually serve public purposes, and online reading can not replace our traditional hobbies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3661971831 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75922466822 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5333447049 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299217874044 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969159250714 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782576740996 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182309373413 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435588599224 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.