Many years later, there will be few people buying paper books or newspaper to read, instead, they will choose to read everything online without any payment. Although this type of reading has some advantages, I strongly do not agree with this point of view because of some reasons listed below.
To start, I would argue about some obvious benefits of reading in traditional form. First of all, paper books and newspaper bring about a wide range of beneficial effect on children’s development, particularly becoming a good reader. It is because reading in this way help children completely focus on their stories without any distraction from outside factors like advertisements, for instance. Secondly, there are several research point out that reading printed books and newspaper at the bedtime give people better sleep because they help you easily fall asleep rather than reading from technical devices. Moreover, this is definitely the most simple way to support your favourite writers or journalists.
On the other hand, I would discuss the disadvantages of Ebook to make my point clearer. The first detrimental effect is that not all information from the Internet is guaranteed to be true. The enormous development of Internet allow anybody to write an article and post it to any social networking sites, compared to printed newspaper whose every single news is carefully examined by fact checkers from newspaper offices. Second disadvantage is reading too much on computers or phones may have an adverse effects on your eyes. Blue light from computer and phone screens does harm to not only your eyes, but your brains as well, even worse, you have to suffer from dementia just because of too much blue light effects.
In conclusion, the trend of reading online has a number of drawbacks, therefore, I would say that we should still consider the traditional way of reading in paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some research
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Suggestion: who's
...ng sites, compared to printed newspaper whose every single news is carefully examined...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...but your brains as well, even worse, you have to suffer from dementia just becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12621359223 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67911131454 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624595469256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3522657955 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.846153846 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228718614906 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729220968753 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085050022469 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149150846948 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119472564779 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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