In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and at work. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problem it will cause.
From this day forward, due to the globalisation, more machines substitute many of household chores and work assignments, more spare time we receive. The following essay will examine the advantages are brought by apparatuses and its primary causes.
Firstly, let us take a look at the convenience and omnipotence of machine-based in both industry and usual life. The company's economy may be saved by reducing worker's salaries and insurances. Morever, according to almost economists, the mechanized corporations will have twice the output of the non-mechanized opponents, because of the higher productivity they gain from their difference. Besides that, if we use some automatic appliances in fabric, these can help us to complete our daily routines more easier and faster. For instance, robots clean the house, washing machine washes dishes, etc. Thus, machine replaced is necessary for much aspects of life.
On the other hand, despite of having many benefits, mechanized age also itself causes some troubles, such as increases unemployment rate and rises human laziness. By playing an importance in industrialization century, automated engineeries gradually replace a large amount of labors in association, lead to a high rate of unemployed people. Unfortunately, these unemployers will damage too much to the country's financial, for example, increasing social's vices, enormous well-fares,... Furthermore, human personalities might be changed a lot, especially a laziness. Childrens will not be responsibled for their duties and cannot live independently without parents and machines. As a result, people will lost their works and characters if there are a huge quantity of apparatuses.
In conclusion, machines can cause many problems to our life. However, I strongly believe that, nowadays, engineery will have its positive effects outweight its negative's.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... help us to complete our daily routines more easier and faster. For instance, robots clean ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...Thus, machine replaced is necessary for much aspects of life. On the other hand, ...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...asing socials vices, enormous well-fares,... Furthermore, human personalities migh...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
... and machines. As a result, people will lost their works and characters if there are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69892473118 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2078352452 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698924731183 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0990472923 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296890713366 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757947239174 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566032719847 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173822230258 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529088264044 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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