The gap between the rich and the poor people is increasingly widespread, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address the problem.
In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, the problem of indigence has become one of the controversial questions, requiring immediate attention. These days there is a huge gap between indigent and wealthy people and this situation is exacerbating. this essay will discuss what reasons might lead to such issues and what can we take to ameliorate them.
Probably, one of the main causes behind the issue is growing unemployment in some parts of the world. For instance, almost 900 million people in Asia are living below the poverty line and a percent of unemployed people there is the highest in the world as well. In addition, serious overcrowding is often cited as the major cause at this problem. it is evident, that the more population is, the more live hood and resources they consume that in turn leads to a shortage of goods and poverty. For instance, in Africa families tend to have many children and it is common when parents just are not be able to maintain all large family and, as a result, all members live in really poor conditions. In short, lack of working places and overpopulation, nowadays, might be a cause of rising poverty that lead to growing a difference between rich and poor social layers.
While the problems may seem intractable, there are solutions available. The first one is better support from the government. it is true, that only the authority is capable to adjust a decreasing level of poverty and to limit exorbitant amount of money which owned by businessmen and entrepreneurs. For example, in Russia’s parliament a legislative proposal was offered which claimed to give jobs young specialists even if they do not have any experience. Another option would be to impose taxes for second and more children as Japanese people have implemented. this measure can stop overpopulation and partially resolve the problem with poverty.
To sum up, this essay discussed what can we do struggling with a huge gap between poor and rich people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02719033233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8448564726 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4015681315 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305057029697 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832835321043 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682626285414 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179079743491 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052586386945 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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