In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
t is believed that the average life expectancy of people is longer these days, compared to the past. There are various reasons that have caused the situation and the following essay will discuss them in details.
Firstly, there are various types of medicines that have been found by medical scientists nowadays which have saved many lives. These medicines have been proven that they could cure serious diseases which have killed millions of people in the past. For instances, with the invention of penicillin in the 20th century, it was proven that it could heal infected wound. Consequently, the mortality rate due to infection had decreased significantly in the last century.
Secondly, people are living longer due to they are better educated nowadays. Many governments have realised the need of higher education for their people; therefore they provided free education until secondary school. With this positive development, the number of illiterate people has declined, and many of them have read and understood the standard of healthy living. For example, many women now understand the process of delivering a baby, whereas they should have a routine visit to their doctors and understand the types of food that they should consume. As a result, the mortality rate of women has been declining drastically in the past few decades.
In conclusion, it is a fact that people are living longer these days. There are many factors that affect to the phenomenon, but in my personal opinion, the top two main factors are advance medical research and better education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22695035461 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.184397163121 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113475177305 0.0946595960268 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031914893617 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0460992907801 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0709219858156 0.0403226058552 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6039906992 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0177304964539 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921985815603 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177304964539 0.021408717616 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177304964539 0.011925033212 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1570.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1811023622 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385826771654 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295275590551 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216535433071 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133858267717 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6039906992 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.037074148 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.4512118911 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5384615385 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3724625471 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 0.814263465372 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 49.0660205936 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.58108108108 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353957600699 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13388487201 0.102741220458 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0650284736335 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568614413556 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13941193004 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151076597398 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650098749919 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334978964928 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677098986063 0.0638462369009 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246708999846 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593368104499 0.058150111329 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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