Giving detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the government should impose restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Various newspapers and TV news channel give detailed explanation of criminal activities which have bad impacts on people and society. Therefore, some home sapiens argue that the bureaucrats should impose strict rules on the news media to overcome the situation. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement because not only will it prevent other criminals to get influenced by the various crime methods used in a crime, but it will also stop news channel from making false implications about a crime.
The primary reason why the government should impose strict rules and regulations on news channel to display complete information of a crime is because other minor criminals probably will not get influenced by them. This is because whenever a complete explanation about a crime is broadcasted on news, other criminals learn new techniques of crime and start committing crimes in the same way as mentioned in the previous cases. This results in the increase in the number of crimes. Take the example of the pattern of various rape cases happened in India since 2012, all rape victims were killed by the rapists after committing rapes because it would not be possible to catch culprits if the victim is alive. Thus, the above example clearly depicts that detailed news is the major cause of repeated crimes.
Another reason is that it will prevent news media from making false predictions about a crime. It is commonly seen today that various news channel such as “India Tv News” make unreal assumptions about suspects of various cases for the sake of attracting viewers to their channels. This sometimes results in the mental harassment of common people. In the suicide case of renowned India’s actor Sushant Rajput, for example, various false cases of murder and drug abuse were made on actress named Rhea chakroborty by the media of India on the grounds of being the actor’s girlfriend.
To conclude, I wholeheartedly agree to introduce some strict rules and regulations on the printed media and tv news channel because it will reduce the number of crimes in society as well as prevent them from mentally harassing the common individuals of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12640449438 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65774131128 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3437880748 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.384615385 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127547069939 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505045700607 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500077629376 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896065723818 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567261306613 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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