Global warming is becoming a huge threat to human existence on this planet. What are the causes of this? What are the effects?
Climate change has become one of the major threats that could greatly affect humans' life on earth. The main cause of this problem is the increasing level of CO2 in the atmosphere and one of its effects is the rising of sea levels.
The primary cause of this predicament is the increasing carbon concentration in the planets' atmosphere. CO2 is a greenhouse gas that is mainly produced by the combustion of fossil fuels, which are mostly used by humans to run their cars or vehicles. This is to say that there is a significant relationship between car ownership with the CO2 level. As the number of cars on the road rises the carbon dioxide also increases. For instance, a study conducted by the World Health Organization revealed that car ownership and the level of CO2 in the atmosphere a decade ago was significantly lower as compared today.
One of the effects of this huge issue that could happen is the rising of sea levels. This is because as the concentration of carbon dioxide becomes higher the global temperature increases. The increase of earth's temperature contributes to the rapid pace of melting ice sheets particularly in Antarctica and Green Land. As a result the melted ice adds to the expansion of seawater which causes the increase in its level. For example, research done by the National Aeronautics and Space Administration found that the sea levels rose by 7.5 cms every 10 years because of the melting of major ice reservoir in the earth.
In conclusion, the rising global temperature poses a threat to human race and this is because of the increasing CO2 concentration in our atmosphere and this results in the rising sea levels.
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 78
- The charts below show the males and females arrested over five years and the reasons for the most recent arrests. 78
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of a large fish called the salmon. 78
- The bar graph below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010 70
- Many parents believe that children should play team sports like football, basketball and so on, instead of individuals sports, such as swimming or running, during the school scheduled timetable. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
... increasing carbon concentration in the planets atmosphere. CO2 is a greenhouse gas tha...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tween car ownership with the CO2 level. As the number of cars on the road rises th...
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Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...re a decade ago was significantly lower as compared today. One of the effects...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ticularly in Antarctica and Green Land. As a result the melted ice adds to the exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83820290938 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485915492958 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1333575786 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223902449055 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897056658713 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793386603142 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157231293145 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432870569404 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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