Global warming is increasing, but many people do not take it seriously. why is it happening? how it can be solved.
Extra heat has become one of the main concern, although this issue is not considered as a major global problem by many people. As there are several reasons lying behind this issue, some solutions should be taken into account.
There are some reasons that outline why human being has no concern about environmental problem. To begin with, industrialization and technological developments can be contributing factors that draw individuals’ attention to themselves despite negative results they have through taking a heavy toll on environment. In other words, improvement in various industries like manufacturing of different machines, cars or technological innovations like cell phones have eased lifestyle enormously by occupying people’s mind and giving them more convenience. This can result in lack of attention global warming as a major problem of environment. Therefore, individuals will make light of this issue due to the fact that the comfort and benefits they can achieve from technology or industrial development are more significant. Another issue can be lack of public awareness. Many people do not have any knowledge about global warming, greenhouse gases and as a result, they cannot have any consideration about this problem even if they have heard it many times in different presses or news.
Some actions should be employed to step this growing problem. One advantageous step should be encouragement towards buying vehicles using green energies as their fuel. If cars use gasoline as their fuel are depopularized and electronic cars or those using green resources like solar and water are replaced, it can considerably reduce the amount of harmful gases(CO2, NO, SO2) released through these day’s cars. This is because, these gases are major cause of global warming and by increasing the popularity of environmentally-friendly vehicles that were mentioned, this problem will be tackled. Thus, encouraging people to use these types of car can be a positive action as to resolve global warming.
To sum up, some main causes such as growth in industry and technology or lack of information about extra heat have brought this problem, popularizing and encouraging people to buy green vehicles can solve this issue to a great extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...roblem. One advantageous step should be encouragement towards buying vehicles using green ene...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt of harmful gasesCO2, NO, SO2 released through these day’s cars. This is becaus...
^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...ful gasesCO2, NO, SO2 released through these day’s cars. This is because, these gases ar...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40226628895 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1215173919 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0106459204 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.133333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222711321338 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810466099461 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451314190972 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12210170851 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457455527919 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.