Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Nowadays, the rising of global temperature is an unavoidable disaster facing by the humankind and, the dramatic increase in ocean levels has been on frightening status. The main problem would be caused that is sinking off the coastal residential area. Therefore the workable solution which could be proposed is re modelling seashore building.
First and foremost, the gravest problem triggered by the increase of seawater volume is sinking the residential area. The difficulty would affect numerous residents who inhabit in the coastal area such as loss of property or possession. Moreover, it could also cause a huge national economic misfortune. The Maldives for instance, the flooding in the coastal zone would have a significant impact on various tourist-spots and, it leads to the reduction of state income. Furthermore, the decrease of salt concentration on ocean water could seriously affect marine biota such as corals and fish. As a result, numerous species of sea creature would be distinct and, it would seriously hit the global food sources.
A logical remedy should take into account is the re-design the building in the risked-zone. The government should introduce and push the resident or estate contractor to apply coastal design models in every building in the seaside. This approach proved successfully lower the damage caused by waves or tides in several Pacific-countries. Moreover, every government should participate in the action to minimize climate change impact on the sea creäture, such as conservation of marine biota and prevent sea pollution. So that, corals and fish could be prevented from distinction.
To sum up, the increase in global temperature is the most challenging problem faced by people around the world. However, a possible solution could be used to decrease the damage such as re-design building and every government should take part in the program which aims to minimize the impact of global warming.
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- The charts below give information on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 67
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 78
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- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nking off the coastal residential area. Therefore the workable solution which could be pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37133550489 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91581710864 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8007731882 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819082489895 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264552499065 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327711668628 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579394393946 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268651705401 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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