Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
In today's fast moving era, global warming has become a major issue, which is seemed very critical for the existence of humankind. Global warming can be defined as a drastic rise in temperature, which is not favorable for anything. Thus, I am going to highlight the prime causes and measures for tackling with this grim problem.
To begin with, rise in temperature certainly brings many predicaments for all the living creatures which transpire on account of multifarious reasons. Firstly, human activities have utterly disturbed the balance of nature such as deforestation for industrialization or urbanization, emission of toxic gases from vehicles and so on, which in turn have made this earth to warm at a rapid pace. On the top of that, careless attitude of People toward their environment has made an aggravate situation because now people do not even cogitate to take any initiative for preserving environment, as a result they use many chemicals ceaselessly, which are equally responsible for global warming. For instance, it has been seen that people are cutting trees in an excessive number irrespective of doing plantation.
On the contrary, any problem can be curbed with certain effective initiatives, which is quite applicable in this case. Firstly, government can play a dramatic role in maintaining a balance in environment by awaring people about dire aftermath of global warming on people and their upcoming generations, which in turn can enable people to be conscious for environment. In addition, people should use electricity vehicles, whereby emission of hazardous gases can be reduced to a large extent. Furthermore, government should enforce stringent laws against those companies and the people, who are exploiting environment in some form or the other.
In conclusion, I opine that environment gives everything which people need therefore; it is the utter responsibility of People to protect it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49319727891 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10685753561 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.60923787 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175568665545 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691195915941 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527593064606 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111743459845 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741302019826 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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