Global Warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measure can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?
The world has long been facing a deleterious problem of global warming and many experts have clearly stated some rooted issues causing the problem. I would like to, in this essay, emphasise one primary reason underlying the global phenomenon. Then, after explaining the fundamental cause, I will attempt to provide preventive steps that government can do to combat the problem.
To begin with, I assume that the earth's warming is led by excessive carbon emission in the air, deriving from various sources, such as transportation and electricity. On one side, the incessant increase of transport vehicle using fossil fuel brings adverse effects to the environment, which is in some parts of countries exacerbated by the unreadiness of public transport infrastructure. On another side, electricity consumption is unavoidably ramping up due to the population hike. As a majority of the energy sources come from gasoline and coal, the more they are consumed, the more polluted the environment will be, thus aggravating the current global warming condition.
To alleviate the problem, I suggest that the state government be active in formulating policies to reduce unrenewable source use for transportation and electricity. In the transport sector, public mass transport can be one of the practical ways for the purpose, which has an immediate impact on the emission decrease. Additionally, the promotion of electric cars can also be tried with the accompanying policy to support the smooth shift from conventional to fossil-free cars, such as tax reduction for those purchasing electric cars. Furthermore, concerning electricity consumption, the government can gradually switch to renewable energy, for example, sourcing from sunshine and water stream. Although I am aware of the minor issue of the energy sources, like their intermittent characteristic, scientists will definitely figure it out to rectify the issue.
All in all, carbon is the main source of global warming and focusing on its use reduction will bring a positive and immediate impact on the environment. However, the sole action from the government is insufficient to address the problem and solid engagement with other stakeholders are inevitably necessary. I am optimistic that the world will have a better environment in the future with such a collaborative measure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47237569061 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13647362575 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0144415478 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.066666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17995516262 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572584063584 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551427736336 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117049619847 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657977008776 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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