Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Earth temperature is getting higher year-to-year because of deforestation, being the most vital environmental issue this day. To solve this, authorities can control the emission, while people should not frequently consume fossil fuels.
On one hand, the cause of global warming is the deforested land due to the urban development which is backgrounded by overpopulation, and fossil fuels consumption, especially for vehicles utilize. If a plenty of trees in the forest is cut, it will distract the carbon cycle, being no organisms in land to absorb carbon dioxide released to atmosphere from transports, impacting the ozone depletion. As per WWF data in 2018 about Sumatra’s tropical rain forest, the immense expansion of Palembang city, in the south region, in addition to carbon dioxide of car ownerships there resulted 5% of CO2 emission total entire the world. As the long-term effect, Indonesia is a country suffering the most of hot temperature in regard to lack of CO2 absorption, implicated as one of the countries which affect the rising the Earth’s warm temperature, now.
How to solve this? Firstly, government should regulate the regime about the urbanization, imposing to expand the green space in towns, establishing new residence without cutting a plenty of trees. Secondly, publics have not to utilize fossil energy, say, contributing to use non-motors vehicle in the town, such as bicycle, and taking public-transport to travel outside the region. Therefore, this way may reduce the rising of earth’s warm, revealing an immense effect, albeit this only a tiny action.
To sum up, the roots of global warming are that deforesting jungles and fossil fuels needs. Authorities must develop the urban area eco-friendly, and communities must use the fossil energy rarely. If we do not increase high level of self-awareness of this world’s problem, it will be the beginning of human extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld not frequently consume fossil fuels. On one hand, the cause of global warming...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... communities must use the fossil energy rarely. If we do not increase high level of se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35099337748 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05479683346 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4195193124 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148604125226 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045685870833 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472741884587 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078192313687 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227046469623 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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