The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.
To what extent do you agree?
science plays an imperative role in life of every individual, and it is believed that for development of a nation, goverment bodies should grant more funds for science teaching. Up to some extent i agree with the statement because many other factors do involve in country's progress which are not based on science.
To commence with, there are some facts in the support of allowing more finances to teach science. The pertinent reason is that, it is a subject that does require funds due to it's costly material that is used during practical work. Cost of theory education in this field is almost similar to other subjects, however material required while practical experiment is inexpencive. Moreover, it is subject that is related in most of the other fields such as, farming and medical. More monetary expenses are required, while performing researches in these.
On the contrary, importance of other subjects cannot be overlooked. To be more precise, subjects like Information Technology and History are as pivotal as science. Electronic equipment used in computer studies and historical findings are quite expensive and by reducing the financial support will make it challenging for students to learn efficiently. Furthermore, students who have interests in art and music will face lack in their their education because they will not be facilitated with expert teachers. In addition, arts and music is also a crucial part of a country's progress and it's recognition globally.
To conclude, although necessity of allowing more funds to teaching science is there, yet many other subjects which are as essential as science cannot be neglected.
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Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25757575758 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79753761594 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6008309111 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.769230769 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288237612016 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892257554987 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680239062019 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181218109927 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895655940791 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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