IEducation is the fundamental element for a country, community or individual to grow positively. Subjects involved in education provide awareness towards development. However, every subject has their own importance and value. I disagree up to some extent with the view that government should only focus on Science subjects and neglect the other ones.
Science subjects are definitely helpful but this does not mean that only these subjects should be taken into account .Other subjects like arts, literature, crafts and humanities also playvital part in overall progress of nation. These subjects provide us awareness about culture and history and strengthen our skills as well. For instance, arts subject help us to be a skilled man in different works, learn how to communicate and live with a sense of complete enjoyment. Literature is also the same it teaches us about how powerful language can be, what it means to be human and many more. Therefore, the above mentioned subject cannot be ignored in a modern world. While these subject also bring the best out of people as a result they end up as oriented people
On the contrary, science subject has major contribution which has changed the world dynamics dramatically. Science plays a crucial role in medical, agriculture and other areas and makes our lives happy and comfortable.
To conclude, government funding should not be limited to science subjects. No nation can progress only on the wings of science. For the overall development of the country government should support other subjects as well, hence, keeping all subject’s importance in perspective, funding should be allotted equally or accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33962264151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83389442926 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4915419185 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292127503666 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953302236989 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749238665168 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181875966046 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766798555685 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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