Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution
Old people lived a more cheerful and healthy life in the past. some experts believe that it is because they performed more exercise and spent a lot of their time with their family and friends as compared to present. However, they are now surrounded by loneliness and many other health problems. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and provide put forward some solutions for it.
There are two major reasons behind these problems faced by old aged. The first is the metamorphic change in family structures. People were more interested in living forming a joint family in the past due to which parents and grandparents were able to spend time with their children under one roof; which gave them happiness. However, folks now prefer to live in a nuclear family in metropolitan cities in order to acquire a modern lifestyle and career opportunities, which is responsible for isolation from their parents and grandparents. Due to this change, old people feel isolated and alone. The second factor, linked to the first, is that when they feel neglected by their own children and grandchildren, they get a huge emotional as well as psychological set-back which results into lack of motivation to exercise. Thus, in such circumstances elderly people adapt sedentary lifestyle and fall prey to weak health.
Tackling this problem involves altering the mindset of youngsters. Predominantly, people should revert back to old tradition of living in a joint family. Moreover, old people were given the command of whole family so that they feel important and honored, whereas now, they are consider being a burden on their family. That is why, returning back to old living, their vitality in family paradigm will increase which is essential to keep them motivated.
In conclusion, unless efforts are made to shift the mindset of young people from modern living to old living, old people will continue to suffer; mentally as well as physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... cheerful and healthy life in the past. some experts believe that it is because they...
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Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...tant and honored, whereas now, they are consider being a burden on their family. That is...
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Line 9, column 332, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
... a burden on their family. That is why, returning back to old living, their vitality in family...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11801242236 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68889046622 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2889809977 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1805031721 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566823268285 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373548021529 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122253961813 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318437765759 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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