Social networking portals brought profound changes in the ongoing world. It is argued that social networking sites brought negative impact on both individual and community. From my perspective I completely disagree with the given statement. Surfing in social media enriches command of students, employs, politicians and many other in their particular filed.
Social networking benefits one individually and society also. People can get huge knowledge by using social applications like Instagram, Facebook, twitter, WhatsApp etc.For example, using twitter helps to gain information regarding any type of sector such as education, job opportunities, political events. In the present competitive world social networks plays a crucial role in development of people. Moreover, one can get information about any programs held In their surrounding and all over the world with an ease. For instance, the government sectors and private units are news about their job opportunities, achievements sand developments by using social networks effectively.there are an entirely set of reasons to strengthen my view point.
Social web platforms provide a plethora of data of local, national and international news easily. One can get entertainment news, political news, weather news in the one and only platform that is social media. which is very cheap and any one can access to social apps. Furthermore, the pupils can collect the information about their present studies and future education intuition one clear example is few sophisticated universities provide vast information about the course and openings held in the university in their Facebook pages with appropriate pictures which attracts the students.
To conclude, social network platforms benefits all types of communities in their own way. People by using social media can grab huge information about all type activities running in the present world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70877192982 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02887306141 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6747808503 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151175270208 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694658734012 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772070153021 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111087231342 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633947160838 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.