Government should ban abortion. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Abortion is very common in recent years especially the youth group due to the lack of sex education knowledge in schools. Many people argue that this circumstance should not be allowed anymore while I partly disagree with this opinion because it may pose a very serious threat to the sustainable development of mankind but there are still many benefits of this situation.
On the one hand, although there are many reasons which people have to overuse the abortion as a great solution, it may result in lots of detrimental effects to the development of communal activities. First of all, the human rights are extremely essential in any country and the governments are responsible for protecting it such as prohibiting the abortion. Secondly, if this action is banned, people will attempt to enhance their awareness about sex education. According to the analysis of many experts, the rate of abortion is dramatically increase.
However, there is a sunny side to this picture. People do not have to bear the pressure of pregnancy thanks to the advent of technological advances. For instance, many people can not suffer from pregnancy because it may interrupt their job. In addition, instead of getting pregnant, lots of people choose to get married without children. As a result, abortion is a good way which pave the way for the sake of the simple life. For example, when people have to get to grips with their chances but children sometimes affect their decisions in many circumstances.
In conclusion, it seems to be met with many oppositions of the majority of citizens but I believe that if people can broaden their experiences to control these scientific advances properly it may bring a lot of benefits to their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...s, the rate of abortion is dramatically increase. However, there is a sunny side to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01736111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80792451896 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0060672841 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0448182082539 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0153501034108 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291531731351 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0264629248826 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193853952209 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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