In this contemporay epoch, every sector of life is revolutionsed, while some still needs advancement. And, research is one of them, which is imperative to promote healthy life and keep numerous ailments away. However, now ouestion arise, either authorities or private organization should fund these researchs. Here, I believe funding by private companies can be really beneficial.
Admittedly, individuals funding and controlling researchs can have several merits. To commence with, these researchs require investment of immense capital, while private sectors can bare huge expenses. Consequently, it will ease pressure on nation and money saved can used for other developments such as infrastructure, defence and education. To illustrate, less affulent countries will not have to depend on generosity of other nations for any research for any medical purpose. Thus, under-developed countries will have on effect on economical conditions. Hence, if private sections will fund researches country will remain financially sound.
Moving further, not only it will help financially but also risk of stoping risk due to money or any other trouble like droughts or other natural calamities will be reduced. For instance, during any emergency, when law-makers will be out of power then private researchers will still be working and can prevent any epidemic disease. What is more, private companies can omitt possibility of delay in research due to funds problem. At last, only one demerit of this trend is that private organisation can be money minded and launch any product with high market value. Deducing, if this disadvantage can be overcome that absolutely it will be boon for mankind.
In conclusion, as I aforementioned this phenomenon can help to make country financially sound and elevate speed of development in scientfic research. So, private industries should fund these researchs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...eloped countries will have on effect on economical conditions. Hence, if private sections ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, really, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58680555556 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03084826153 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6037338384 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6470588235 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201184424404 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785311261036 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512774361426 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129831457769 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014330222765 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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