The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a tendency that violent contents can be seen more often in films and television recently. Some people believe that governments are responsible for controlling such improper contents in mass media in order to control the level of violent accidents. I certainly agree with this given view, of which reasons shall be discussed.
It is the major duty for governments to ensure the security of public. However, statistic indicates that the crime rate will exaggerate when people are exposed to large amount of violent contents in their daily life since potential law-breakers might imitate criminal actions in media. Furthermore, for those who intend to break the law such as stealing or robbing, might get inspiration of how to escape from being caught from criminal cases shown in public media. Thus, these improper contents have become accomplices of offenders.
In addition, excessive contents of violence have extremely negative influence on children. As we all know, children do not have sufficient ability to distinguish right from wrong, and they are more likely to imitate behaviors seen in films and TV. For example, children like to imitate the heroes shown in the films, who have been participating in more violent behaviors. Consequently, children might think it is okay and cool to behave violently as what the heroes do in the films.
In conclusion, violence in public media negatively effect on social security and stability. Therefore, governments should take appropriate measures to restrict violence in films and television in order to reduce the crime rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79823251182 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6623678568 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224370871041 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076267720046 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678958587896 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142217456506 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759272643273 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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