The government should control the amount of violence in films and televisions in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Films and televisions have great impacts on humans. They make our lives more interesting and vivid. However, there is an ongoing debate whether violent films and series are attributed to the occurring crimes. Many people blame the films for deteriorating the morality of the present society, but personally, I feel ambiguous about the physiological effects of the films
To begin with, films will create a misconception in people that fighting is the only way to resolve conflicts. Some viewers are usually captivated by the amazing feature of the fight without being cognizant of the actual peaceful meaning that the directors want to convey to the viewers themselves. Additionally, people will often try to imitate what they saw, so when the viewers watch movies with flamboyant actions like flying kicks or motor racing, they might replicate actions in real life, which not only mutilate themselves but also put other people in the line of death and life.
On the other hand, films, besides their purpose to entertain the viewers and bring profits to the filmmakers, help reduce crimes. The reason is that a film can be a useful illustration of any circumstance that may occur in real life. With proper guidance, the viewers, especially inexperienced ones, know how to cope with situations when they happen. For example, parents can teach their children methods to avoid or run away from kidnappers or perverts by showing them films that demonstrate those cases and their tragic consequences, giving them better visualization of crimes.
To sum up, it is certain that the government should take measures to prevent inexperienced viewers, notably kids, from violent products by putting age limits. However, for other people, violent films are a must-watch since they are full of dramatic actions and gunfights as well as blowing up things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i feel, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19127516779 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73694081174 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637583892617 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9670297901 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102925044982 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398548473562 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378602485703 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675734604221 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417659103659 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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