Building railroads are increasingly popular in modern societies, especially in developed countries. Some people believe that spending more money on railways than roads is unnecessary whereas, others support the idea. This essay will discuss on how I completely agree to develop different transportation modes such as trains.
Although advancing railways is important for both economical and as well as travelling, but many think its building is not as crucial as roads. As they are environmentally unfriendly, railways make deforestation and, therefore, some of grasses and trees are entirely gone because of it. Moreover, railroads are prone to cause long-lasting damages to the ground and, in fact, their problems will be irreversible sometimes. Most of them claim that arranging money to build railroads is perhaps not applicable and inconvenient when roads are lacking.
On the other hand, railways facilitate travelling inside and even outside the country. For example, Bangladesh uses trains and they allow the people should travel with them without delay. Furthermore, if there are no trains, Bengali populations could not manage their commute because traffic jams are the worst nightmare they have. Thus, if the government should not have spent money to create its railroads, drawbacks would not have left and everyone would have stuck to his or her position with no movement. Another fact is that railroads are not produced as much pollution as such cars and motorbikes.
Finally, this essay argued that allocating budget for railways transportation is more importantly vital than roads, and I personally believe creating such these travelling routes are way far essential than any other thing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the grasses') or simply say ''some grasses''.
Suggestion: some of the grasses; some grasses
...ways make deforestation and, therefore, some of grasses and trees are entirely gone because of ...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd inconvenient when roads are lacking. On the other hand, railways facilitate t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52091254753 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89976745178 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1765885917 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18290354761 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535215268242 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479420247539 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106298049009 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286196204683 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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