Government should spend money on railways rather than roads .
To what extend do you agree and disagree with this statement?
The development of country is possible with the development of transportation. In my opinion government should spend more money on railway rather than roads.
First of all, government should spend money on making railway when railway is made it help to connect various places of country to travel in less period of time.That will make people t use railway in their daily life in order to save time and money. With the railway the development of rural area is possible in less period of time.
Secondly, the development of railway will reduce the use of private vehicles and consumption of fuel also. It will help to increase the economy of country. For examples when people use private vehicles they need fuel, fuel is only available with the middle-east countries thus,the less consumption more dollars remain with in the country. Which will increase the economy of the country.
In conclusion, I can say that the development of railways will bring out more effects on country economy. peoples lifestyle and increase development activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That
...ountry to travel in less period of time.That will make people t use railway in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27485380117 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75724637608 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.5003252024 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179649986641 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756629712849 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999516633047 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130737093038 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102610658653 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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