Nowadays, highly sophisticated land transportation facilities guarantee a country supreme financial growth and development. There has-been heated discussions as to whether the authorities should provide more monetary allowances to the railways than to the road transport system. This disquisition enunciate the necessity of imparting higher budgetary allocation to the development of rail infrastructure with supporting evidence and facts.
To embark on,a well established railway system is helpful for the easy movement of huge amount of goods. Trade and logistics through the railways would be faster than that by the roadway, thus it aids for the easy functioning of industries. For example,in India,coal and other products are carried directly from the mine to the factories by goods train,so that it reaches to the plant in higher quantity within short period of time. Secondly, the cost of rail transport is comparatively lesser than that of the road transport system. For industries it would be more easy to depend on railways because of the lower price packages. Hence it goes without saying that governments should provide more financial assistance to develop rail transportation.
Furthermore, trains are the fastest way of land transportation. It helps large number of passengers to travel conveniently regardless of distance. Unlike the road trip,a train journey consumes less time and money of the travellers. Also, railways are more safer than the roadway because of less accident rates. Thus it is the need of the hour to pay more attention to the development of railway system.
However, roadways also serve the nation in different manner. It is impossible to imagine a country without proper road transport facilities. So, both rail and road transport system need equal financial support from the government as both these boost the country's growth to great extent.
In conclusion, it can be irrefutably stated that,the state has to spend more for railways because of its important role in the smooth functioning of industries and contributions to the revenue. It is hoped that the authorities would pay more attention to railways for the prosperity of the entire nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42815249267 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02295833656 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7760099465 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125379727525 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374427098438 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256614903689 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695589553457 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221234964036 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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