In recent times one of the most debated issues relates to development of transportation. Some people assert that the government ought to allocate more of their budget to rail rather than roadways. However, I strongly believe that both roads and railways are equally important and the government should spend an equal amount of money on both types of infrastructures.
Bolstering my view, I would like to highlight reasons as follow. Firstly, it is obvious that when a country has an extensive rail network, it will positively affect the logistic cost. As a result, the selling price of a product would be cheaper as a single-vehicle could carry tonnes of goods. Secondly, the development of rail networks would reduce traffic congestion. Nowadays, there are a large number of vehicles on roads, so there is always a problem with traffic congestion. Trains can carry hundreds of passengers and this prevents the use of vehicles, thus reducing the traffic on roads. For Instance, with the help of the central government, Ahmedabad will soon start its first metro rail service and this is likely to reduce the use of cars and motorbikes on the road.
However, it is not cost-effective to develop rail infrastructure in small villages, while building roads can prove cost-efficient in such places. Furthermore, there are delays, changes or cancellation in train timetables and people who totally depend on railways become helpless as they cannot reach their places in time. In this situation, they could use their personal vehicles or public transport. For Instance, in India, when most of the trains are delayed in the rainy season, people generally use their vehicles or hire an auto-rickshaw as a mode of transportation to reach their places.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the government should maintain an equal balance in their budget for both railways and roads as both are equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94539196666 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6983483148 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109341410944 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035234466864 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332009291443 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716677355606 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317073252113 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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