Some people believe that technology has distract with their family members. This is good or bad effect on people?
There have been too much different in past and present. In Norden generation people are technosavvy so pupils do not interact with other. day by day invention are more creative therefore, mankind immense use of their instruments like a mobiles, laptop,televisions etc. always one coin two side so all things have their own pros and cons. this essay shed light on merits and demerits of technology and their use.
To begin with, the many advantages of technology but it's depends on how to use them. today's generation use more and more mobile phone and laptop hence they are always in busy for any kind of family work or social works. today new generation chat in Facebook, instagram, whatsapp and so on. they always believe stay connected with their friends and group hence they don't spend quality time with family members. After a long time, mankind feel alone with own family members. Sometimes invention learn too much for their better future but human being addicted with technology. For example, uk government state that the 10% human being committed suicides for their loneliness because they never support family members.
To other side, in today's era most of people take benefits of technology for them personal works. people learn software and other things so pupils acquire the knowledge of latest invention as a result mending get high paid job in international companies. Nowadays every person use online shopping and online payment transfer method therefore human being life make easier than earlier. To show, Oxford university state that the in last 5 years digitization has drastically increased by immense use of Norden instruments.
In final reckoning, i strongly advocate the second opinion of this essay because technology has not an issue but how to use technology is more important things. And if people use immense technology therefore they fell loneliness with their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1715210356 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62151903304 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.983394625 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232817712865 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752078881252 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637930010591 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148258480053 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456944047519 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.