Governments and individuals should spend too much money to celebrate national festivals such as new year.do you agree or disagree.
Festivals bring happiness in humans life and it leaves the memorable moments in their life.The legal bodies as well as citizens spent huge amount of their money to celebrate these national events.I partially agree with the given argument and would like to disclose my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
The two main point of spending excess amount of money to celebrate national eves by both legal authorities and individuals. For one thing is probably that,people can get together with their near and dear ones on these events.They can spend their quality of time with their,which would ultimately help to create strong bond between their relations.That is why, folks like to spent huge amount of money to celebrate national festivals.Another thing may be that,both folks and governments may like to spent maximum amount of their money to show-off their status to other persons and nations.For instance, Indian government paid huge proportion of their money to celebrate international yoga day, independence day and republic day in every year.
In spite of this, why governments should not spend too much to celebrate national events.The first obvious fact might be that,spending money to celebrate national events are wastage of money.So, governments should pour their money to provide better infrastructure in the form of roads and so on.They can also invest their money by building new factories or companies, which would provide jobs opportunities to natives.Therefore, it can helps to demolish unemployment rate in the nation.The another fact may be that,individuals can donate their money to non-government organisation and these organisations can invest these money for clothing,shelter,education and medicine.As a result, it would helps to improve the life of orphan kids.
In an epilogue, it can be said that, governments and citizens can spent their money to celebrate national eves.but it should not be in excess manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43046357616 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32654089164 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 248.080632053 49.4020404114 502% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.0 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.4 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259694296862 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15465100052 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580018540996 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163682590808 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599844948517 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 13.0946893788 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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