It is said that governments' budgets should be allocated for conducting a survey into the betterment of people's health instead of space programs assisting. I believe this point of view has both positive and negative impacts on human life.
On one hand, investing money in space projects can be seen as beneficial for several reasons. Initially, it provides assistance to human space exploration since this spending can better accomplish the schemes that are invented by scientists and hence bring individuals a great source of valuable knowledge about space outside the Earth. A telling example is Yuri Gagarin who became the first person to eat and drink in microgravity, and this has been a pioneering experiment for others to follow. Secondly, the government's expenditure on a universal plan is a rewarding way to find out about a novel planet that is beneficial for survival in terms of global warming. This is followed by the introduction of the information and data of the new place into society.
On the other hand, spending national coffers on space programs seems to be infeasible for developing and less-developed countries due to loads of causes. One of the main reasons for this is those countries do not afford to spend money on such a costly process while the authorities have not met the needs of their residents yet. The governments are encouraged to utilize their budget, especially on human well-being. On account of being the main key to success, people's health should be the leading concern, and wellness centers are required to ensure that citizens' health is always in good condition. Another explanation for the sharing of government's budget spending on health is that the success rate of space plans is low so the authorities may encounter many obstacles and criticism. On investing too much in those schemes, they might exacerbate the domestic issues such as lacking money for epidemics and crime -fighting off.
In conclusion, although the government's investing money in univeral projects is a rewarding way that creates individual better understanding, I believe that this is appropriate for nations that are top-grossing, and people's fitness level is more vital than other things.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
It is said that governments budgets shou...
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...ve and negative impacts on human life. On one hand, investing money in space pr...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
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...ent for others to follow. Secondly, the governments expenditure on a universal plan is a re...
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...d data of the new place into society. On the other hand, spending national cof...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...ess centers are required to ensure that citizens health is always in good condition. Ano...
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...for epidemics and crime -fighting off. In conclusion, although the governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17318435754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271544074 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9254966011 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258147095541 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884185057303 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417512045944 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163927867529 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434453089756 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is said that governments budgets shou...
^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve and negative impacts on human life. On one hand, investing money in space pr...
^^^
Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ent for others to follow. Secondly, the governments expenditure on a universal plan is a re...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d data of the new place into society. On the other hand, spending national cof...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...ess centers are required to ensure that citizens health is always in good condition. Ano...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for epidemics and crime -fighting off. In conclusion, although the governments ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17318435754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271544074 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9254966011 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258147095541 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884185057303 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417512045944 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163927867529 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434453089756 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.