Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think
it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Central councils provide a good portion of aid to artists of their countries. Whilst, it is a great help for them, some people think otherwise and states that the money spent could be used in a more needful cause instead of spending on artists. I believe that the government should use these/its funds in developing basic amenities like medical healthcare.
On the one hand, it is incontrovertible that the art institutions cannot make profits, so without the help of the government, numerous theatres and other platforms cannot perform and may close. It is very imperative for the government to assist these organizations in order for them to survive and thrive. Open-air concerts, for instance, usually are organized in Tier 1 cities and are backed financially by the local councils. Therefore, local support will always be needed.
On the other hand, might be people want some entertainment but with the growing population of this planet, health institutions are in dire need of the government help. Public hospitals have a shortage of basic equipment to treat people. AIIMS hospital, to illustrate, is the biggest and renowned medical institute that provides free of cost treatments, has blamed public funding for their dearth of nurses and beds. Thus, I feel money given to artists should be redirected to the hospitals.
In conclusion, even though the government is helping the art makers to help them stand among the society in awe of their talent but in reality, assistance should be given to the health facilities and hospitals where lives could be saved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...hrive. Open-air concerts, for instance, usually are organized in Tier 1 cities and are back...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15953307393 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82046687346 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1691394114 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113889403839 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386296558286 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417950596547 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712248892707 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320294161789 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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