Governments should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or dissagree with this statement
it is argued that transportation system is more and more facing traffic congestion. Someone believe that governments should allocate money for the construction and upgrade train lines instead of roadways. While I have to admit this perspective is accurate to a somewhat extent. I still hold a notion that both railways and roads need be invested in order to boost socio-economics development.
On the one hand, the developed railway systems can bring myriad benefits for inhabitants. this is to say, train line is a treat public transportation as it helps reduce finacial burden in comparison with using private tractors. Moreover, urbanization and demographic trend currently influence on environment so encouraging citizens use train is crucial measures in order to fight climate change. By contracts, railway systems are only suitable for public purposes because train must stop at the station and people might go by other vehicles to get place where they want.
On the other hand, road is one of infrastructure elements in social life, if countries wanted to improve their economic and their dwellers living standard, they could develop the road systems as it makes the circulation of goods, passengers or something else much more convenience and smooth. In particularly, though using private tractors make contamination of air, it gives the mobility for people. However, development of roads helps poor residents con access market, education and general value so as to advance their life. Besides, the upgrade of roadways can decline traffic in center cities at rush hour. Last but not least, the road maintenance fee is lower, being easier for authority to manage.
To recapitulate, despite the benefits of railways, I strongly convinced that governments ought to develop roadways and railways equally in order to achieve best results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, as to, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38965517241 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9532001627 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3722560015 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128854221975 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419173271833 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351788397727 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803170070752 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402576967589 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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