Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In recent years,the government of many countries have started focusing on building train station instead of roads like before.personally,I perfectly agree with this view.
As the transporting demand is higher and higher,creating many types of move is essential matter but it leads to the growth of vehicles and roads are too quickly.that invisibly make us to get some troubles such as pollution,traffic jam,etc. Fortunately ,railways is gradually built up more and it can resolve these problems. Besides,moving by train is also safer and less dangerous; For instance, In 2016,the number of accident came from roads accounts for over 70%.Meanwhile,this figure of railways is just 3%. it is clearly seen that railways is better more than roads in many cases. but the only disadvantage is constructing railways will be costly so much,especially money and natural resources. so that the governments have had to reduce the construction of roads and just concentrated on building railways . proof is roads construction have decreased 54% in five recent years. In contrary,building railways still rises continuously year to year; Increase 23% in 2014 then 52% in 2016 and has no sign of stopping.
In conclusion,the given statement that government should spend money on railways rather than roads is good idea and the truth proved it is right. More and more train station was created,more and more people do not need mind much about their moving safety or they can travel in rush time without the boredom with traffic jam.
but these is not enough.Although many railways exist,many people still choose roads for the main moving. because the fee is quite expensive and many people do not know about the benefits of railway. that make people are hard to reach and use it. I suppose fee has to decrease and advertising is necessary problem too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, still, then, while, as to, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20469798658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20491395726 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8834591496 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179621247323 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593211538598 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072907949916 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114531489454 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585788606716 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.