Grandparents take care of the children when their parents are out at work. Do you think the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
It is commonly observed that almost all couples are working professional nowadays. In this endless race of career building, they must leave their kids with their grandparents which is justified in the eyes of some people. Personally, I feel, this trend has both merits and demerits associated with it.
To commence with, there are many benefits of putting the responsibility of children on the shoulders of the old members of the family. Primarily, they have reached the stage of elderness after experiencing a lot of obstacles in family life. To illustrate, grandparents today were once the parents and hence they can handle a child in a sensitive manner such as feeding him from time to time, storytelling, and engaging them in various activities which cannot be known better by anyone else. Secondarily, they are ideal to inculcate good moral values in them by moral lectures and fictional stories which is an additional asset for children.
However, this trend has some drawbacks as well. Firstly, grandparents are not much efficient physically in nurturing a child as they might find it difficult to chase a toddler who hardly sits in one place. Secondly, at this age, most people become forgetful and they may forget certain things which may give birth to a disaster. For instance, in our neighborhood, there was a veteran man who was playing with his grandson on the balcony. At sudden, the man got some work and came in for a while but forgot about his brood playing on the balcony and we hardly saved the child from jumping. So, keeping children with them could be hazardous sometimes.
To conclude, keeping children with grandparents makes it easier for parents to fulfill their professional commitments and it helps a child to learn ethical and moral values but could be dangerous too due to their physical incompatibility and poor memory by age. According to me, it has more merits than demerits, perhaps they must be provided with an assistant to help them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a sensitive manner" with adverb for "sensitive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rents and hence they can handle a child in a sensitive manner such as feeding him from time to time, ...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...incompatibility and poor memory by age. According to me, it has more merits than demerits, perh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98791540785 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78375800032 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604229607251 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3566048818 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152378827739 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507711531188 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391846526719 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978025446811 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338669906002 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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