The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The rendered line graph provides information about typical daily demand for electricity and pie charts show about what the electricity is used for in winter.
At first glance, it can be clearly seen from graph that the demand for electricity in last 21 days of winter was higher than summer days that was 40,000. In winter, typical daily demand for electricity was increased from starting 3 to last 24 days than winter. However, in summer, it was followed same trend as winter.
Moving further, in pie, the electricity used for heating rooms, water registered the highest mark that accounted for 52.5%. It was followed by ovens, kettles, washing, machines having proportion of approximately 17%. The electricity used in winter by lighting, television, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools was almost same by 15%.
Thus, from an overall analysis, it is clear in graph, the typical daily demand for electricity in winter was maximum than summer. But, the use of electricity in heating rooms and water was higher as compered to others.
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...s winter. Moving further, in pie, the electricity used for heating rooms, wate...
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...on of approximately 17%. The electricity used in winter by lighting, television, ...
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...y in heating rooms and water was higher as compered to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12716763006 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61986846658 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.005375878 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412700723577 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186045718973 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115332073158 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285485613743 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823105486349 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.