A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The public holds different views about the rights of animals in the modern life. While it is argued that animals should be treated as humans, I believe that it is necessary for people to use those animals as daily needs.
On the one hand, it is reasonable that people should stop exploiting animals.Firstly, the humans are not likely to have the right to exploit the animals. For example, many rats are suffer from pain in the laboratory so that scientist can explore new medicines, and this is unfair for these mice. Secondly, all creatures in the Earth should be respected because each element plays an important role in this world. As a result, the animals should have the same rights as humans because they also contribute to the development of the human world.
On the other hand, I side with those, who believe that animals should be devoted for the higher goals. basically, it is the basic rule of life in which huge animals eat the small ones. For example, testing on rats is the best way to find out new medicine, which can save the lives of million people. Additionally, it seems to me that animals is a crucial source of food which can help human to survive. As a result, it is a necessary evil when people need to meet the demands of life.
In conclusion, I believe that it may impossible to prevent people from using products from animals because this is a right requirement of human beings.
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- Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of 61
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...t people should stop exploiting animals.Firstly, the humans are not likely to have the ...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...the animals. For example, many rats are suffer from pain in the laboratory so that sci...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Basically
...should be devoted for the higher goals. basically, it is the basic rule of life in which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60956175299 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49214572305 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533864541833 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9577648413 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395757546568 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138924513181 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111329092591 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242324974715 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851329371885 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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