A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this modern world, people prefer their own choice of food, some people think that animals should not be peanalized for the sake of individuals intake,however, other individuals believe animals should use to satisfy human needs as well as for future experiments.
On the brighter side, everyone have equal rights to leave and enjoy the planet.However, for the intake of pupils animals are exploited. Consequently, it affect the planets as important species got vanished like floura and fauna.In addition, instead of cutting the animals society should use them in transport and for farming so that it can be beneficial in agriculture and bear nutritious food.For example: bullock cart, Horse cart, camel ride.
On the other hand, with the increasing in the number of population, it will be a great burden on government to fulfill the vegitables for whole country. Moreover, intake of animals like fish and meat gives protein and calcium.For example: Eating fish also cure many deceases.
In addition, animals are used for the wide varities of future development, like Pharmacutical industries rabbit are tested for the adverse effect of particular drug whereby, in medical firm for difference sucessfull cure operations like bypass surgery it is tested on animals. Likewise, animals are used for making different cosmetics items like leather and many luxury product from snake and other species.
In conclusion, cutting of animals is not fair but for the survivel of humans and many wild animals some specious should be compromised.however, in my opinion darker side is more beneficial to planet, for scientific as well as wellbeing of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37164750958 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94903694378 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.454530997 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.25 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.125 7.06120827912 285% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316955943945 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140104186342 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856066325931 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183940986074 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875443488295 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.