A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, most of the people argue that animals have the same rights like humans and therefore, people should not be utilized them. Whereas, some of the others believed that animals are used for human's basic need such as food or study purpose. In my opinion, I believed that animals are made for human's pleasure. This essay will discuss both point of views.
On the one hand, it is clear that not only now but also our ancestors time foster of animals are mainly because of food and investigate some studies. Moreover, human's basic health benefits from meat and other animal products are indispensable. Growing number of disease would reduce by such essential minerals and vitamins of diary products as well as animal meat. Likewise, plenty of researches are succeeded by the help of a beast. For example, after discovery of injection penicillin tested on a rat and which was a milestone of world medicine.
On the other hand, many disagree this and feel that animals should be free from human assault. Unnecessary killing or incommode towards animals is leading to expiration of many beasts. For instance, some kind of monkeys namely lion tailed macaque is obsolescent in evergreen forest. Despite this employ of animals would benefits for human being either health or growth of modern medicine.
To conclude, killing or immoral behaviour on to the animals may endangered. Nevertheless, animals are never equal to human beings. Everyone can accomplish good concern to the animals which would be either beneficial to the people but not harm to such species.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'likewise', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283216783217 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944055944056 0.0946595960268 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0524475524476 0.0501214627716 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0174825174825 0.0437548338989 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143356643357 0.122226691241 117% => OK
Participles: 0.034965034965 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54327664921 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244755244755 0.0326793684256 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0664335664336 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027972027972 0.021408717616 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1565.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06589147287 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.399224806202 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282945736434 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182170542636 0.203846283523 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112403100775 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54327664921 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 61.7474671358 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.125 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1557470821 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 44.4195736434 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.23728813559 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424605794634 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107030522363 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686327956026 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524743456485 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126038270434 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143654545817 0.134430193775 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1063418985 0.0742795772207 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274712728349 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0475889167378 0.0638462369009 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268005622143 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109954471018 0.058150111329 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.