Animals form a chain of ecosystem, and exploitation of these creatures will lead to imbalance in nature, as they reduce in umber, so they should have same rights as humans. On the other hand, employing animals and using them for consumption and research leads to scarcity of animals while, they too have equal right to live. In my opinion, animals should not be exploited by people since they too have the right to live.
Animals should be given equal importance as humans, we can find industries producing commercial goods made of animal products. For instance, hand bags and belts are found to be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in short', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225071225071 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.207977207977 0.155533422707 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712250712251 0.0946595960268 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034188034188 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0598290598291 0.0437548338989 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.139601139601 0.122226691241 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0655270655271 0.0403226058552 163% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51885120509 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.045584045584 0.0326793684256 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.039886039886 0.0861772015684 46% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02849002849 0.021408717616 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011396011396 0.011925033212 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1880.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8934169279 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344827586207 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247648902821 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144200626959 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.137316102897 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51885120509 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.6660338244 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5384615385 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0953257395 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.615384615 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.3033518206 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.42452830189 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418361930321 0.332605444948 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151102511392 0.102741220458 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0539278017879 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.596734607834 0.534860350844 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149105682623 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186653957147 0.134430193775 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765258787661 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408165931905 0.324371583561 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719390970478 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276498648907 0.228012699653 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100830725711 0.058150111329 173% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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