A growing population is a big problem in many countries. Should the government provide new homes in the cities or country side?
Every country has been facing the rise of population problems and a result of the shortage of housing. From my view, I believe that the government should have some measurements to decide the construction site in town or countryside area.
There have several advantages of the houses build in the city centre. At first, the main reason is a convenience for those who work there, it can reduce their commute time. Secondly, the amenities like essential public transport and healthcare have a complete system, to advance the living style. Tokyo, for example, a popular city with a high density of people, but the whole facilities for government-provided is let the residents have a better life. Furthermore, tenants living can enjoy some novelty experiences. In contrast, the drawbacks of house building in town are the natural environment would be devastated and have sound pollution due to the crowded.
On the other hand, there also have some pros and cons for far from the city for homes are building in the rural regions. One of the advantages is the residents living there have fresh air for breathing in a clean environment without air pollution compared to the city area. Moreover, the traffic jam also would be avoided if life there, on the contrary, the time might take longer due to the distance of the working site. However, another positive view of the rural areas is the cost living is cheaper than town area although the fewer facilities can choose. As a result, living in a rural region can reduce the burden for the people.
In conclusion, both zones have positive and negative factors, hence, I believe that the government should build the houses on both sides and let the people to choose their demand they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67330494033 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.127174201 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122817012438 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414148308335 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537339184849 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893933194155 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574061513647 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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