With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?
The population in urban area has being witnessed a huge rocket with many people immigrant from rural places, which have put a massive constrain on the available housing and activity space. Personally, such trend would cause serious issues for both citizens and the society as a whole.
Unable to live in an adequate space would greatly impair mental and physical well-being. On the psycho aspect, being constrained in a limited enclosure area and have less chance for outdoor activity increase the likelihood of depression and claustrophobia. Besides, the lack of air fluency indoors fosters respiratory-related disease and undermine working efficiency as the low oxygen containment. Living in that atmosphere for a long time would only favour the breed of bad behaviors such as snooze and lazy, as a result, risking loss of self-confidence.
It is noteworthy that the disadvantaged group is not the only victim for shrinking in size of residence, the affluent group who is capable of affording bigger house, sometimes, also bears the consequence. When gap enlarged and the disadvantaged group noticed, it is often the case that the group which policy less in favour of holds a hatred against society, and the wealthy people always be targeted as their revenge object for seeking justice. Murder, robbery, stealing may witness a rapid increase if the soaring house price shows no indication of mitigation. Therefore breaking the peaceful and harmony atmosphere of the overall society.
In conclusion, reducing average residence area for accommodating more population is, by all means, the worst method. Controlling the immigration amount and encouraging rural development are the right choice to make.
- More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books and magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extend you agree or disagree? 90
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 38
- Many museum charge for admission fee, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- Some people say that in the modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 564, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rice shows no indication of mitigation. Therefore breaking the peaceful and harmony atmos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43071161049 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02904806966 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0772491985 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104488016908 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031364783616 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337411287199 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627909125394 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312404576621 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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