With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
These days, overpopulation has led to various problems in our lives, especially a lack of food. Genetically modified foods seem a reasonable solution to reduce the rate of starvation in the world. Although this alternative can be harmful, I believe GM Foods can bring various benefits.
On the one hand, various reasons explained our world is not ready for GM foods. The first reason relates to the influence on human health called allergic reactions. New substances and DNA from other organisms transplant into foods without safety. Because genes can easily be changed when being triggered new environment creating chemical reactions. As a result, it is not sure that everyone is safe and healthy after consuming GM foods. In addition, manufacturing GM foods costs an arm and a leg. The progress requires professional researchers, and modern technology to tissue transplant and deal with unpredictable situations. Therefore, we need to put huge capital into experiments and human resources.
On the other hand, many proponents of GM food contend that genetic engineering can solve food issues. Firstly, GM crops help the environment as farmers need to use less pesticide, for instance, one or two sprays per harvest instead of three or four sprays for conventional varieties. GM foods are not only cheaper but safer. Because it reduces risks to farmers by using fewer pesticides and provides the nutritional value of crops by supplying vitamins and minerals which make food more flavor and better texture. Nevertheless, the progress of GM foods is not time-consuming and produces more products at a low cost. As a result, it alleviates the problems of hunger in the world.
In conclusion, I understand that biologically engineered foods can be a solution to the food shortage. It is predicted that the staving can reduce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s transplant into foods without safety. Because genes can easily be changed when being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21088435374 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01319847992 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3159750571 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6315789474 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18958767015 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568826281216 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500333874247 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109503812347 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395872840227 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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