Happiness is considered very important in life.
Discuss the reason why people define happiness differently and how to obtain happiness?
People hold different opinions on the nature of happiness and the way to approach it. While happiness is difficult to define since it means something different to each individual person, there are several common ways that people could share with regard to experiencing happiness.
It is apparent that the perception of happiness varies dramatically from each person depending on their individual characteristics and environmental factors. With those who wish to pursue a successful career, promotion opportunities or moving up the career ladder offer them job satisfaction and feeling of happiness. For others who desire to contribute to a community something positive, it is much more important to find work which is interesting and enjoyable. At the same time, the greatest thing for someone is to devote their time and energy to care their family and nurture children in which the success of their family members is the most supportive source in their life.
Although it seems almost impossible to describe exactly the concept of happiness, there are several basic ways to achieve it. Firstly, it is essential that our basic survival needs, for example, a safe place or having enough food to eat, must surely be met, ensuring people to have a reasonable quality of life. Secondly, it is common knowledge that sharing interests and experiences with our family and friends plays an important role in helping us relieve stress and balance our daily life. This would bring frequent positive emotions such as joy, love, contentment or excitement, encouraging people to over come challenges. In addition, other key factor could be setting reachable targets that individuals would take each step in order to increase their material and spiritual values like money, health, power or fame.
In conclusion, although the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, most people would have several common ways to approach it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31168831169 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79736009084 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4935581748 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181150520391 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069323044557 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732873968585 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127210713203 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782074218659 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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