Having a good memory is the only requirement to be successful in life Do you agree or disagree

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Having a good memory is the only requirement to be successful in life. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely acknowledged that eidetic memory is exclusively required in achieving extraordinary accomplishments in lifespan. Nevertheless, from my perspective, without the combination of other abilities, the valuable knowledge which is absorbed and automatically remembered through the development process, was not properly applied in daily life.

First and foremost, leadership and team-builder skills are the primary factors of being successful. The majority of tasks are virtually completed thanks to the coordination of potential members of a workgroup. As a result, if a team has an effective leader and astonishing teamwork, they can grasp the opportunity to meet the aims. A case in point, Vin Group has become one of the essential and giant corporations in developing Vietnam in the international market owing to its powerful president and other talented members of the general assembly.

Furthermore, successful people can summon up their strengths and improve their weaknesses based on the lessons they experienced. The ones who can critically analyze their skills and turn them into advantages are more likely to go further than others. As an illustration, if the restaurants obtain customers’ positive and negative feedback and consider changing their services and working attitude, the number of customers will significantly increase in a short time. Moreover, assessing the strength and limitations facilitates each person to minimize the unnecessary risk occurring in the future.

To sum up, the definition of successful people does not surround gifted remembrance but other abilities, namely teamwork and self-analyzation skills. Consequently, the key identifying trait of successful people is not having admirable memory but more talents than that.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8122605364 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33720653998 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670498084291 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8307392211 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975045981382 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329021149593 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433392768478 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586993943092 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419465616866 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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