We all are familiar with the maxim health is wealth. Nowadays, people have more concerned about their health. There are numerous ways to keep stay well-being in life. Basically, we can divide into two different methods, first is that through taking the good food substances and the second is physical activities.
To begin with, if the persons will eat the right and perfect food so they can stay healthy, they should eat balanced diet which contains plethora of carbohydrates, proteins, minerals instead of outer or heavy junk food. The healthy diet provides all nutrition that are essential to evolve our body growth. It is must for living beings that they ought to consume balanced provender that helps to keep fits our body and disease for example, people can ingest blanched food and specifically, they should eat seasonal vegetables and fruits, as well, they should boil the vegetables in hot water owing to this the tiny insects or most precarious insecticides will be removed then able to cook and eat.
Further moving, if individuals are taking good diet it is fine. However, to digest that eaten food it plays the vital role in developing a body growth. so, they have to implement physical exercise or any game, sport in their daily routine because at the daily bases people eat over and sometimes heavy food stuff so it assists to digest ate material. Moreover, if their somebody is incapable to do theses activities like old aged people they can walk twice a day in morning and evening, probably it helps them to reduce stress also make them healthy persons. In addition to this, for all age groups they can practice of yoga it is optimum way to make our body fit and totally diseases free it also help to person redemption from the evil of anxiety.
To recapitulate, it is evident that if the people would implement those mentioned essential steps they can live happiest life and can enjoy their life in smooth way and stay being a healthy wealthy person, the most advantageous thing is that they can curb those dangerous ailments and live along.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85028248588 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44967379878 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.267003102 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.076923077 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126699391393 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480231538237 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038815853631 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769593998306 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025368663063 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.