The chart below gives information about southland's main exports in 2000, 20*..,and future projections for 2025.(20*..:for test purposes, use and refer to the current year)

Submitted by Arwinder on Tue, 11/06/2018 - 01:28

The bar graph depicts the amount of southland’s main exports in 2000 and current year and further prediction for 2025.

Overall, international tourism would increase to high amount in 2025. whereas, dairy products are exporting in large amount in 2018 than others years and meat products has minor differences.

It is vivid that the international tourism amount tourism’s amount is highest in 2025. It was slightly up to £8 billion in 2010, while now in current year it is incline to well under under the nine billion pounds. Then, it would be reached nearly to the end of the amount. In terms of milk products, these are now sending to overseas in considerable amount near to the £10 billion.

But in 2010, it decreased by three billion pounds. However, it is estimated that it would surge in further year of 2025 to approximately nine and a half billion pounds. Considering the meat products,it is following the decreasing trend that was £6 billion in 2010. Now it is moderately decreasing than previous year and has amount of £5.5 billion. Eventually, in future in can be went down exactly to £5 billion.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
... would increase to high amount in 2025. whereas, dairy products are exporting in large ...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: under
...w in current year it is incline to well under under the nine billion pounds. Then, it would...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...on pounds. Considering the meat products,it is following the decreasing trend that ...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...y decreasing than previous year and has amount of £5.5 billion. Eventually, in future ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97894736842 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85978903974 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536842105263 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0746790755 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131389588344 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539327897712 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865678990266 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121412399307 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1214763993 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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