With the help of internet life has become easy .Many people are able to do office work from home .Does the advantages overweigh the disadvantages?
we have become more globalized than from past few years . world wide web has shifted to our lifestyle at another level. work from home is one of the notable advantage. it can be clearly seen that benefits are greater than the disadvantages of this trend.
To begin, there are variety of benefits of internet through which we can now work from home. First and foremost by this opportunity the people who are living in rural or less developed area which is away from urban they would not required to migrate any other place. As a result concentration of people at City area will decrease eventually there will be less traffic problems on road at peak hours. Moreover this will prove time consuming for commuting public and they will able to spend quality time with family. Secondly, this would also prove beneficial for single parents especially for women in their preganacy as well as in metarnity leave.
In the contrary, other people argue that not Every job offers work from home opportunity . people need to communicate physically to outer world in order to build adequate communication to meet the job requirements. it is seen that people who work at home are often less productive as compare to other employees. Furthermore, most workers shift to other activities while sitting at home without any restrictions. they are more likely spend their energy and time onto useless stuff.
To conclude , there are clear benefits of this thing and opponents' opinion can be varied person to person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58429289765 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.194133351 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173775952263 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627103259608 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611169352962 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925711819863 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543388951803 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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