Homelessness is one of the global problems today , it is happening even in the biggest countries . This essay will discuss about solving the major issues of dwelling without home and to find bes solutions for this situation.
On the one hand , i think that the enormous cause of homelessness is depends on lack of affordable houses for people who have not enough money for the accessible house but government also must help to people and it will restriction in overpopulation whose have many people in one home . For example, in the biggest countries such as India , China have more than 1billion of population and it shows that overpopulation is increase day by day . As a result, homelessness increases day after day and government should limit overpopulation .
On the other hand, we can not see the developing in some countries, if we take Africans and south part of the world an example, the countries very poor and it will bring homelessness and illness too . To solve this phenomenon i can advise to investigate the poorest countries and if government together with everyone will help to the miserable country it will might have impact on developing of income and outcome of countries and restrict of homelessness. For instance, in the Uzbekistan in this year was established and developed volunteer and people helps to people who have not home as much as possible.
In conclusion, homelessness is a common problem in numerous countries. Government shoul play a huge role in this issue and solve problem of homelessness with to develop county and construct new uncostly houses with equipment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04905660377 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99623847873 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539622641509 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8527486346 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143199592556 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644045247894 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296996256177 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999418420501 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343220300635 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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