homeschooling
Being educated has been usually related to going to school or even going to college despite the unprecedented encroachment of online learning. To own a certain certificate (that is considered later on to be a plausible evidence for being academically qualified), people have to enroll in an educational institution and then choose whether to study on campus or online. However, since people started pursuing knowledge a minority opted to do so at home - without even being affiliated with a certain school.
For various significant reasons, there is an array of people who advocate the fact of going to school and renounce homeschooling. Undoubtedly, schools tend to prepare scholars for their upcoming social life in the long run. Getting in contact and being obliged to work with their colleagues on daily basis will- serendipitously- help them to develop some social skills; such as, how to work in a team and developing sense of community. If they do not interact with others at a young age, they inevitably will not be confident enough to work in a team, nor will they develop self esteem and the sense of community. Not only does being a team member assist them to acquire diverse social skills, but it also conduce those perceptive and diligent kids to have a sense of competition. Compelled by this distinctive sense of competition, these children will perpetually have the motive to exert their utmost effort and excel.
On the flipside, nonetheless, a small group of people (insignificantly) presume that homeschooling would -ineludibly- be more advantageous whereas going to a school is not . Their point of view is conspicuously attributed to the fact that they assume that parents definitely know best their child's weaknesses and strengths. Therefore, they may develop a customized study plan to cater for their needs. Nevertheless, the aforementioned assumptions seem to be untenable. Undeniably, if the teachers were certified to work in the schools, the would be qualitied enough and diligent to be aware of their students' weaknesses. Besides, they will endeavor to help the learners overcome them.
To conclude, even though a minority might claim that homeschooling is the best approach to be educated, a plethora of people present substantial reasons to prove that it is not. In my own perspective, studying in a school is the most beneficial way to be educated; plus, gaining some life experiences.
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- Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense Discuss both points of view and give your own 73
- Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense Discuss both points of view and give your own 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has usually been
Being educated has been usually related to going to school or even goin...
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Line 3, column 707, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'conduces'?
Suggestion: conduces
...uire diverse social skills, but it also conduce those perceptive and diligent kids to h...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tageous whereas going to a school is not . Their point of view is conspicuously at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17602040816 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08812750298 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0506059163 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.352941176 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0532541216122 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0206317381221 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565317672673 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046839885171 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498386813886 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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